Transformers: House Adventures

[Spiritprime]

I know that there are a couple of errors in this first part, but this is my first comic and I'm feeling pretty shy about it.

http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh84/spiritprime/TFHA_zpsc7f3adb7.jpg

First episode is a bit of a Take That Me because of how much I dislike WFC over Mass Effect. Mass Effect is way more entertaining than WFC. This isn't meant to hurt those who love WFC, just me.

Episode 1: Game Obsessions
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh84/spiritprime/GameObsessions1_zps92423806.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh84/spiritprime/GameObsessions2_zps0a9b8b07.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh84/spiritprime/GameObsessions3_zps792c253d.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh84/spiritprime/GameObsessions4_zps3604d609.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh84/spiritprime/GameObsessions5_zps09c972af.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh84/spiritprime/GameObsessions6_zps77ac42b9.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh84/spiritprime/GameObsessions7_zps94730e0e.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh84/spiritprime/GameObsessions8_zps8d756fe7.jpg

Yes, I know. There are errors, but in the next episode, things will get better as I go along. These episodes happen randomly off the top of my head. So... Haha!

[UltraMarginal]

Very Nicely done, especially as a first crack at photocomics.

My main suggestion would be location of speech bubbles to ensure left to right/down the page reading maintains the sequence of speech.

I am very much looking forward to future installments.

[lancalot]

hey that was pretty good... the expression on the figure is spot on... Keep it up...looking forward to more :)

[Hursticon]

Pretty good for a first run, it's got plenty of potential too so I look forward to seeing more Spirit! :)