Cmdr Prime
16th January 2010, 10:01 PM
At the moment I am typing a new Fan Fic
STARFIRE PRIME'S BEGINNINGS
Many eons ago, a group of female Autobots lived on a planet in a different dimention called Uraya 2. We had our own Headquaters
and I was the leader of our little band of females. My name is Firestar and I am a jet.
Each of our Females Autobots was talented in there own special way, Blackarachina was famous for her webs, she could put
up defence grid, that was powerful enough to stop anything that came our way, Arcee and Ariel were our sports cars and were
capable of great speeds, they could dodge a laser blast in a blink of eye and fire back destroying anything in a nano-click, Chromia was our
technision, able to build things and repair things around the base, Ariel was our Medic and Moonracer, was incharge of our security
and our Enegon Cubes supplies.
Day after day we were attacked remorsely, by marauding tribes, that wanted our Energon supplies. The alarms went off inside
the base and we all geared up for the offensive.
"Keep on them ladies! don't give them the satifaction! we have to keep our Energon stockpiles safe" I orded
"Right" replied Chromia
Right" replied the others
So we kept fighting back against the hordes of different tribes that wanted our energon stockplies.
There wasn't a day that went by that we weren't under attack by these tribes.
We held a confrence in the Command Center and in the end, we all decided, that it was hopeless, and with our
Energon supplies dwindling, Chromia decided that she would build a ship that would take us off the planet.
When the ship was completed, below our base, Chromia reported back to us.
"Firestar, I have constructed a ship that will carry all of us off this planet and out of this dimention" said Chromia
"That's great news Chromia, when will it be ready? I asked
"It will be ready in a nano-click, Firestar" replied Chromia
"Right" I nodded in agreement
When it was completed we all boarded our ship, and took off from our Headquarters. I was thinking that we will never
see our beloved home ever again.
As we travelled through the worm hole that connected our universe to the other universe Blackarachnia
came over to me.
"With your permission Firestar, I would like to be dropped off at the Beast Planet" said Blackarachnia
"Are you sure you want to do this, Blackarachnia" I replied
"Yes, I am sure Firestar, you see, I'm partially metal and partially oraganic" she replied
"Very well Blackarachnia, you have my blessings, Farewell" I replied.
We pulled up at the Beast Planet, so Blackarachnia went to the jettison chamber and got into an escape pod and
jettisoned herself towards the beast planet. Then Ariel re-ignited our rockets and headed for deep space, still
we were still searching, for a suitable home to call our own.
Lint
1st February 2010, 03:45 AM
Oooh a coming of prime story with fembots. You should probably write the next installment before my imagination gets the better of me.
Cmdr Prime
1st February 2010, 09:16 AM
This is the next part I had to make a few chenges like turning it into a script
We had to find a suitable planet that we could live on without being harassed or threatened that so that we could live in
peace.
Firestar: "Chromia! is there any planets in this Solar System, that has life on it?
Chromia: "There is one planet about 300 light years away, Firestar"
Firestar: "Really! and what's the name of this planet?
Chromia: "Its called Cybertron"
I thought to myself about this planet.
Firestar: "Cybertron ay, hmmmm most interesting. Ariel!, Arcee!, make preperations for departure we are heading for Cybertron".
Arcee: Roger that Firestar"
Firestar "Fire Rockets"
Ariel: "Copy that Firestar"
Ariel fired our rockets and we took off toward our new home Cybertron and Moonracer came over to me.
Moonracer: "What do you think it would be like on that planet called Cybertron, Firestar?"
Firestar: "Don't know Moonracer, but, what I do know is this, its got to be better than the one we left behind"
I started to think about our home world once more. We had no choice but to abandon our homeworld, and I
looked over to Moonracer and she nodded in agreement, then Ariel, Arcee and Chromia looked over to me and
we all thought about our homeworld we left behind, our base a few of our friends.
We were drawing near to our new home world Cybertron and I was having another thought
"I hope the people on this new world are friendly, and they respect us, as fellow warriors and not some objects
of their affections.
We were in a stationary orbit around Cybertron and I called to Arcee and Ariel
Firestar: "Is there any place we can land this ship?"
Moonracer was scanning for a suitable area. While Moonracer was scanning the planet, we too were being scanned
by a group of male Autobots from their Headquarters.
Ratchet: Sir, we have located a ship entering our airspace"
Optimus: "Can you identify its origns, Ratchet"
Ratchet: Negative sir, but it is an Autobot ship"
Moonracer found a decient spot to land.
Moonracer: "Firestar! I found a good place to land, and its not far from that major city to the north its called Iacon"
Firestar: "Alright ladies we will set down here, at the space port of Iacon make preparations for landing"
Ariel & Arcee: Copy that Firestar"
We landed that ship at the space port of Iacon and we alighted from the craft.There was people milling around the space port
and none of them took any notice of us females, they just blindingly carrying on with their jobs.
Optimus had sent out Ironhide and Sideswipe to investigate our ship.
They walked around the ship perimiter and they were scanning for any life forms on board.
Meanwhile Moonracer had activated her scanners.
Moonracer: "Firestar"
I turned around to face Moonracer.
Firestar: What is it Moonracer"
Moonracer: Someone has activated the perimiter defences, we'd better head back to the ship" said Moonracer
Firestar:"Right"
We all transformed and took off back to the ship. We had noticed a couple of intruders hanging around. When we
arrived back we all transformed back to our root modes, and I raised my laser rifle in readiness to attack, as did
Moonracer, Arcee, Ariel, and Chromia.
Firestar: "Hold it right there, what do you think you are doing near our ship!"
Arcee: "if your smart, you'll leave here now! with her blaster poised and she was ready for action.
Ironhide: We'll leave here, once you told us who you females are"
Arcee:"We have come from a planet in another dimention called Uraya 2. We don't want any violence, we just want to
live here on this planet in peace"
We all lowered our weapons but we kept them on standby, just in case they start causing trouble.
Ironhide: Where's your leader?" in a gruffy voice
I walked foward, and stood in front of my team.
Firestar: I'm here! my name is Firestar leader of this crew. And who are you two interlopers?"
Ironhide: "My name is Ironhide and this is Sideswipe"
Firestar: Are you the leader of the Autobots"
Ironhide: No, our leader is named Optimus Prime"
Firestar: "Optimus Prime, ay hmmm, interesting, we would like to meet this Prime"
Sideswipe:"If you ladies come with us, we will take you to meet him. By the way ladies can you transform."
Moonracer: Yes, we can transform"
So we transformed in our vehicle modes and I transformed into my jet mode and took off for the air, and the others
transformed and we all rolled out to their Headquarters not knowing what to expect.
We were greeted by Optimus Prime the Leader of the Autobots.
Optimus Prime:"Welcome to Cybertron Ladies" as he shook hands with us.
Firestar:"Thankyou" on their behalf
Optimus Prime: "Where do you ladies hail from?
Firestar: "We come from a planet in another dimention called Uraya 2".
Optimus Prime: "why did you leave your homeworld in the first place? weewn't you happy their
Arcee: "You see Optimus, we had no choice but to leave our homeworld. Due to the fact that every single day we were attacked by
these marauding tribes, they wanted our Energon stock piles. So the only option left open to us was, to leave our
homeworld"
Optimus Prime: "I see, I hope my men weren't too rough on you ladies" .
Moonracer: "No, they weren't sir, and even if they did start anything, we would've held our own in battle"
While we were talking to Optimus Prime I was being scanned by Ratchet, and I didn't like it. I swung round and faced him.
Firestar: "If you don't mind Ratchet, I don't care for being scanned. My servo-mechanisms are mine and mine alone get it"
I was getting a little angry with Ratchet.
Ratchet:"Sorry, if I caused you any discomfort, Firestar, I just needed to scan you for my records" .
So Ratchet decided to scan the rest of my ladies as well, first he started on Moonracer, then Chromia, then Arcee,
then Ariel. So we continued our discussion with the leader of the Autobots and we told him about our Energon cube
Stockpile that we had in our possession and we had to find a place to store our stock pile. Optimus told us that it would
be safe to store them inside their base. We all walked over to a secret compartment hidden inside the wall cavity.
Optimus: "Your Energon Cube stocks will be safe in here ladies, no harm will come to them" pointing to the cavity.
Moonracer: Thankyou"
Firestar:Thankyou Optimus Prime"
We turned and walked out of their base and headed back to our ship to retireve our energon supply and bring it back to
the Autobots base, each one of our crew carried a few cubes and I also took a few cubes with me inside cockpit
Meanwhile back inside the Autobots base Ratchet walked over to Optimus
Ratchet: "Optimus there is something different about Firestar"
Optimus: What do you mean, Ratchet"
Ratchet: "Well, I just did a scan on Firestar and noticed something odd about her"
Optimus: "Explain"
Ratchet: It would appear, that Firestar is exactly like you Optimus, here take a look at her schematics"
And he showed him the scan results and he was shocked with what he saw on the scanner.
Optimus: "This is hard to believe Ratchet. Are you sure you scanned her correctly, and there isn't a malfunction in
your scanner"
Ratchet: "No Optimus, my readings are correct. I had also scanned the rest of the females as well, but I didn't find anything
unusual about them, but, Firestar is different.
Optimus: "hmmm, could she be a Decepticon? disguied as an Autobot"
Ratchet "no....I don't think so Optimus, its weird, its almost like her servo-mechanisms belong to you Optimus"
We left the ship with our Energon stockpiles and Moonracer called me
Moonracer:"Firestar, are you sure we're doing the right thing"
Firestar:"what do you mean Moonracer"
Moonracer:"I mean, are you sure that its the right thing by giving the Autobots the Energon we might need them to
power our ship"
Firestar:"Don't worry Moonracer, they seem to be nice guys and that big one, was a perfect gentleman, they treated
us like their equal"
Moonracer: "yeah I know what you mean Firestar, but that medical officer was a bit strange, he kept scanning us for some reason
or other, do you think we can trust them"
Firestar: "yeah I think we can trust them, after all they let us inside their base, and told us that we can stash our cubes inisde their
base, Moonracer"
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