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Ooooh, I've been waiting for something like this from you. Can't wait to see the rest :cool:
Hahaha come at me bro
This is very exciting, nicely framed i might add.
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Originally Posted by KalEl
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Originally Posted by 5FDP
thanks for the awesome response, im kinda having a hard time making a story from the beginning to the end, but i guess i can only give you guys action scenes and let each imagination do the rest and build the story from there until i get better i guess il keep snapping some shots of different scenes and mash it up.Quote:
Originally Posted by UltraMarginal
thoughts?
It's a start dre. A good start at that. Pretty soon creative juices will flow. To give you ideas try and read thru some of the photocomics in tfw2005. some use quite a bit of photoshop as well for the "laser effects":D and the stories tend to start out bland but develop over time to be quite amazing, some are really funny - Grimlock13's Attempt at funnies - loving the peanut gallery of that strip) and quite nice to read - Warring at Play by Polenicus.
One strip which had a lot of potential but ran out of steam though, was Roll Call by Pun3x which is a shame coz it's taken ages now for the next strip, but there is extensive use of Photoshop in this strip since he is using G1 figures which is AWESOME:D vs Gundam etc.
Keep it up dre, you never know what this will snowball into :D:D:D
This is great! well shot and framed like UltraMarginal said. You have a great launching platform to go from so it will be easy soon.Quote:
Originally Posted by Deceptic_Optic
As for a tip for writing: Keep a pen and pad (or mobile phone) near by and just write every idea you have for a story down. When you have a few you will be able to sift through and shoot based around what you have already written down and you will be able to link ideas together soon enough.
Amazing composition as always Deceptic, the shots look great but overlaid with those awesome Comic Strip graphics really brings them to a new level - Bloody well done man, keep it up! :D:cool:
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lol some back issue cost comic rust?... nice touch gok but i was more like going for less talk more action and serious kinda theme and just a lil touch of comedy.Quote:
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