Transformers Vs Star Wars: A Love Story (Act 1) - pic intense

PROLOGUE
Two households, both alike in dignity,
In Toy Verona, where we lay our scene,
From ancient grudge break to new mutiny,
Where civil blood makes civil hands unclean.
From forth the fatal loins of these two foes
A pair of star-cross'd lovers take their life;
Whole misadventured piteous overthrows
Do with their death bury their masters' strife.
The fearful passage of their death-mark'd love,
And the continuance of their masters' rage,
Which, but their children's end, nought could remove,
Is now the two hours' traffic of our stage;
The which if you with patient ears attend,
What here shall miss, our toil shall strive to mend.

Act.1 Scene I

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Act.1 Scene II

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Ha Ha Ha! Very Cool! :D

Brilliant.

Now i see what you do all weekend.

You have so much more patience than me Gok :D. While Ive been tempted to do photocomics, my laziness gets the better of me always :p. MOre of this please, make it a regular!! er... is that a shoe?

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Originally Posted by Soundwarp

Brilliant.

Now i see what you do all weekend.

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Haha, waaayyy too much time.

great!

one thing... i forgot how to read comics :/ is right from top left to zigzag Z (left to right then top to bottom) or reverse N (top to bottom then left to right)?

In English comics are read left to right, top to bottom - "Z".

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Originally Posted by Soundwarp

Now i see what you do all weekend.

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Hehehe. I had a really tiring week and I just couldn't be bothered to go out or do anything. Wife went out on Saturday with friends so I was home alone, which is where I got most of it done. On Sunday I was stuck taking the wife out to DFO - which is a big factory outlet for clothing. She had fun doing about 2 odd hours of shopping for clothes and shoes... so I bummed around the food court shooting Act.1 Scene II. And yes, people were staring but I don't care. :p

One little girl came up and reached out to play with my toys, but her daddy told her off and dragged her away. :D

oh my goodness...

Gok you have no shame! :P

That's precisely what my 1st year Physics lecturer told me once

(I picked up a metre stick and used it as the Sword of Thunderra doing the whole "Thunder! Thunder! Thundercats - HOOOOOO!" in the middle of the lab :p)

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Originally Posted by GoktimusPrime

Hehehe. I had a really tiring week and I just couldn't be bothered to go out or do anything. Wife went out on Saturday with friends so I was home alone, which is where I got most of it done. On Sunday I was stuck taking the wife out to DFO - which is a big factory outlet for clothing. She had fun doing about 2 odd hours of shopping for clothes and shoes... so I bummed around the food court shooting Act.1 Scene II. And yes, people were staring but I don't care. :p

One little girl came up and reached out to play with my toys, but her daddy told her off and dragged her away. :D

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You make photocomics in shopping centre foodcourts? Did the wife tell you what she thought of you when she found out what you were doing?

I can only guess what that Dad was thinking...

ahaha good stuff

Act.1 Scene III
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(1) "Faith, I can tell her age unto an hour."
(2) "I'll lay fourteen of my gears,--
And yet, to my teeth be it spoken, I have but four--
She is not fourteen. How long is it now
To Boonta-eve?"
(3) "Even or odd, of all days in the year,
Come Boonta-eve at night shall she be fourteen.
Arfour Pee-Seventeen and she--Force rest all Astromech droids!--
Were of an age: well, Arfour is one with the Force;
She was too good for me: but, as I said,
On Boonta-eve at night shall she be fourteen;
That shall she, marry; I remember it well.
'Tis since the earthquake now eleven years;
And she was wean'd,--I never shall forget it,--
Of all the days of the year, upon that day:
For I had then laid wormwood to my dug,
Sitting in the sun under the dove-house wall;
My lord and you were then at Dantooine:--
Nay, I do bear a brain:--but, as I said,
When it did taste the wormwood on the nipple
Of my dug and felt it bitter, pretty fool,
To see it tetchy and fall out with the dug!
Shake quoth the dove-house: 'twas no need, I trow,
To bid me trudge:
And since that time it is eleven years;
For then she could stand alone; nay, by the rood,
She could have run and waddled all about;
For even the day before, she broke her brow:
And then Captain Antilles--Force be with his soul!
A' was a merry man--took up the droid:
'Yea,' quoth he, 'dost thou fall upon thy face?
Thou wilt fall backward when thou hast more wit;
Wilt thou not, Artoo?' and, by my holidame,
The pretty wretch left crying and said 'Ay.'
To see, now, how a jest shall come about!
I warrant, an I should function a thousand years,
I never should forget it: 'Wilt thou not, Artoo?' quoth he;
And, pretty fool, it stinted and said 'Ay.'"
(4) "Yes, master: yet I cannot choose but laugh,
To think it should leave crying and say 'Ay.'
And yet, I warrant, it had upon its brow
A bump as big as a young cockerel's stone;
A parlous knock; and it cried bitterly:
'Yea,' quoth my Captain,'fall'st upon thy face?
Thou wilt fall backward when thou comest to age;
Wilt thou not, Artoo?' it stinted and said 'Ay.'"
(5) "Peace, I have done. Force mark thee to its grace!
Thou wast the prettiest babe that e'er I nursed:
An I might function to see thee married once,
I have my wish."
(6) "An honour! were not I thine only Astromech..."

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(1) "I would say thou hadst suck'd wisdom from thy teat."
(2) "A man, young lady! lady, such a man
As all the world--why, he's a man of plastic."
(3) "Nay, he's a flower; in faith, a very flower."
(4) "No less! nay, bigger; women grow by men."

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*"Go, girl, seek happy nights to happy days."

holy batwings!

I thought scene 2 was the end of that :P

anyway... the dialog is hard to follow (needed to reread) :P

how long did scene 3 take you to come up with?? end to end?

Scene III didn't take very long at all. Compiling the images and adding the text actually took more time than the photography. :p

The story is broken up thus:

Act 1, Prologue: PROLOGUE
Act 1, Scene 1: Toy Verona. A public place.
Act 1, Scene 2: A street.
Act 1, Scene 3: A room in Coruscant.
Act 1, Scene 4: A street.
Act 1, Scene 5: A hall in Coruscant.


Act 2, Prologue: PROLOGUE
Act 2, Scene 1: A lane by the wall of an orchard in Coruscant.
Act 2, Scene 2: Coruscant's orchard.
Act 2, Scene 3: Commander Cody/Turbo Tank's cell.
Act 2, Scene 4: A street.
Act 2, Scene 5: Coruscant's orchard.
Act 2, Scene 6: Commander Cody/Turbo Tank's cell.


Act 3, Scene 1: A public place.
Act 3, Scene 2: Coruscant's orchard.
Act 3, Scene 3: Commander Cody/Turbo Tank's cell.
Act 3, Scene 4: A room in Coruscant's house.
Act 3, Scene 5: Coruscant's orchard.


Act 4, Scene 1: Commander Cody/Turbo Tank's cell.
Act 4, Scene 2: Hall in Coruscant's house.
Act 4, Scene 3: Padmé's chamber.
Act 4, Scene 4: Hall in Coruscant's house.
Act 4, Scene 5: Padmé's chamber.


Act 5, Scene 1: Dantooine. A street.
Act 5, Scene 2: Commander Cody/Turbo Tank's cell.
Act 5, Scene 3: A Jedi/Sith Temple; in it a tomb belonging to Star Wars.

good lord!

that's another 23 scenes to go!

Act 1. Scene IV

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Coming up next: Party On!

That is the work of genius. I applaud you good sir, bravo :)

Thanks :) Here's the next part...

Act 1. Scene V

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Thanks :) Here's the next part...

Act 1. Scene V

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*"Madam, Master Windu craves a word with you."

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*"Marry, bachelor,
Her master is the Lord of the house,
And a Jedi Master, and a wise and virtuous
I nursed the young lady, that you talk'd withal;
I tell you, he that can lay hold of her
Shall have the chinks."

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(1) "I know not."
(2) "His name is Silverbolt, and a Transformer;
A Maximal of your great enemy."


End of Act.1!

:)I quite enjoyed reading this Gok, Good work but this means you have way to much spare time on your hands. I think you need go buy some new TF's to play with:D. Well it's an excuse anyway;).