I like it. It's clear you have a visual way of writing, even if you can't draw yourself. It's a very well constructed page.

In my opinion (which I'm not sure is worth a great deal ) I think panel 5 should be made a little smaller to allow panel 6, the big reveal, to have more prominence. Perhaps the dialogue in that panel could be one on top of another rather than Corvus's dialogue on one side and Unicron's on the other? Just a suggestion.

As I said, I think you've got something pretty good here!