Corvus

[Verno]

Ok, here's take two, complete with the odd spelling mistake. Sue me



It's pretty boring layout wise with one frame on top of the other, and panel 6 can still be made bigger.

Thoughts?

[Paulbot]

I have thoughts. I'll share them tonight. Some need visual aids.

[Verno]

A powerpoint presentation?!

[Paulbot]

PM'd

[Verno]

With a big Thank You to Paulbot, who helped me flesh out the panels a bit more, we have a new version with some rough, and I do stress rough, images (both Paul's quick sketches and my terrible use of MS Paint. But here we go:



Panel 1 - as before.

Panel 2 - Now has Corvus walking past a huge window showing the Hub debris, and boarding a ship.

Panel 3 - Corvus inside the ship. Out the window we see debris. On display panels in the cockpit to the left and right we see Cybertron on one and Prime on the other.

Panel 4 - Will be an even closer in shot of the maws of Unicron opening (but different so we don't give the game away that it's Unicron yet.

Panel 5 - Some bad-ass looking Cybertronians with a Unicron insigna somewhere on their bodies.

Panel 6 - The big reveal. Unicron beginning to eat the Hub debris and Corvus blasting off to Cybertron to have some fun.

Thoughts?

[Paulbot]

Thanks for sharing my sketches with the world

(I tried to use my graphics tablet but I can't get the hang of it so I gave up and started again with my finger and touchpad )

Hopefully it helps you (and others) get an idea. Rough sketches of the layout help a lot with a comic page.

[Verno]

This is a rough ROUGH idea what the comic would look like.

Except when it's done properly, it'd be awesome!



Ignore Hound, I couldn't find an appropriate picture of a gangway.

Imagine how cool it could be if someone drew it!

*sigh* One day...