feedback for this pic please

[yukitora]

Well BASICALLY =


"okay well I got some ideas for some characters, one would be a wolf bot second is a turtle but he is pretender, kinda resembels a lot of bludgeon in how he dresses but is a maximal and the third is the leader who is in fact a robot very similar to Grimlock but has the idw look to him and dosn't have the speech impediment.

So to cap them up we have

Wolf= same mold as wolfgang but more darker
turtle= pretender very close to bludgeon with the japanese armor idw bludgeon that is but in a beast wars era
t-rex=much like grimlock from idw. "


Help me draw like beastwars cause i don't have enough knowlege about bots.

[liegeprime]

interesting..... very challenging... erm a ninja turtle? only robotic hmmm copyright infringement .... hmm

[optimus1]

Not bad at all, considering the pen died

Are you looking at more of the organic or robotic look? Maybe u might need to show a bit more 'bot looking parts when u can

[Sky Shadow]

Bwahaha! I've just worked out who "a certain someone" is. Again, does Sean realise that there's no Transformer called 'wolfgang'. There are, however, two called 'Wolfang' (a Maximal and a Predacon. They're the same mould, however, so it doesn't matter, just one's blue and grey while the other's red and brown.)

[yukitora]

i thought not to mention the name just incase it started a riot. just being careful, but please continue.

[yukitora]

he didn't like this as his 'commander' and didn't suggest the character to be placed anywhere else (in possiible group). liked the idea, but not for the tf thing.

[liegeprime]

Erm I made a few scribbles after reading the thread... the idea of a ninja turtle piqued my interest but I cant come up with a pretender shell... yet, basically the ninja innerbot snapping turtle... my scanner aint big enough though so the side view and kodachi swordtail isnt fully scanned but you get the general idea. it looks like a whole lot of plates stuck together it was kinda hard but at the same time interesting. I was trying to see how things would be set in place if he transforms from one mode to another. Funny thing is I was watching Naruto filler arc the whole day today and it invloves the Sanbi - three tailed bijouu which is coincidentally a turtle

[yukitora]

you can have my job. i give up.

[liegeprime]

you can have my job. i give up.

nah thanks. I draw only when inspired otherwise I cant do squat.

[GoktimusPrime]

i thought not to mention the name just incase it started a riot.

I would've appreciated it if you'd mentioned that this came from Banned Member because he and I have a contractual agreement where we are not allowed to communicate with each other even via a third party/proxy.

I've deleted my previous postings on this thread to avoid any potential violation of this contract.