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    This:
    Quote Originally Posted by Verno View Post
    Issue #1 of Csirac is slowly coming together, another Page should be complete today actually.
    ...And especially this!:
    I don't know if you're familiar with Transformers: The Lost Seasons Project on DeviantART, but they've picked up TransWarp: Ravage! So those 2 Issues will get made without me doing much (if any) of the legwork.
    Is utterly awesome news man, congrats & well done as always! - Will be waiting for updates feverishly.

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    Here's a little teaser for everyone...



    Transformers: X

    That's right, I've started writing another new story.

    Coming Soon.

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    Here we go Hursty, a little taster of what I'm throwing around in my mind at the moment.

    Transformers: X

    Issue #1 - Draft

    Page 1:

    Note: Panels on Pages 1 and 2 swap between the past and present. They will be notated accordingly.

    Panel 1.

    (Present) Statek sits in his office, with his head in his hands, still distraught with the recent events.

    PNL: Secret Maximal Research Facility.
    Link PNL: Colony Omicron.

    Dialogue PNL X: How many…

    Panel 2.

    (Past) In a shadowy holding cell, a large figure (obscured in the darkness) moves towards the glass at the front of the cell. There are voices shouting outside his cell, but from this far back in the cell we can’t see where the voices are coming from or who they belong to.

    Dialogue PNL: Its Spark has gone into arrest!

    Dialogue PNL (2): Activate life-support procedures.

    Dialogue PNL (3): It’s fading quickly!

    Panel 3.

    (Present) Statek looks up, raising his head from his hands; his attention caught by the voice.

    Dialogue PNL X: How many are you willing to sacrifice?

    Panel 4.

    (Past) The large figure moves closer to the front of the cell again, revealing more of the chamber outside the holding cell, but still not revealing where all the shouting is coming from.

    Dialogue PNL: Stasis-Lock has failed!

    Dialogue PNL (2): Prep for transfer.

    Dialogue PNL (3): We’re losing it…

    Page 2:

    Panel 1.

    (Present) Statek gets up and walks into the larger chamber and towards the shadowy holding cell, but the large figure can’t be seen in the darkness.

    Dialogue PNL X: Prepared to send screaming back to the Allspark…

    Statek: Please, don’t.

    Panel 2.

    (Past) The large figure now stands right at the front of the cell, one hand pressed up against the glass. Through the glass we can see another holding cell. In it are three Maximal scientists in a flurry of action; one of them, Statek, is clearly in charge. They are standing over an operating table. On the table is the body of a large figure. They are trying to keep the large figure on the table alive with all manner of technology and such.

    Statek: Get the R-Tank!

    Maximal 1: It’s too late; the Spark has begun reintegration with the Allspark.

    Panel 3.

    (Present) From inside the holding cell, Statek approaches it. The large figure still can’t be seen. At the far end of the chamber, behind Statek, are some large elevator doors.

    Dialogue PNL X: I can hear their Sparks, calling out.

    Panel 4.

    (Past) From inside the holding cell with the Maximal Scientists, the large figure on the table lies motionless. Statek, at the head of the table, his hands gripping the table, is hanging his head, having lost the Spark. The two other Maximals look to each other, concerned. Through the glass of this holding cell, we can see the other large figure in its holding cell, still with its hand pressed against the glass.

    Maximal 2: It’s gone.

    Statek: … Slag.

    Panel 5.

    (Present) Statek stands at the glass. He looks up. From the shadows looms the large figure, towering over Statek.

    Dialogue PNL X: And my Spark calls back.

    ----- End -----

    A little difficult to read with the two scenes being told at once, but hopefully with a couple of readings you'll get what's going on.

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    Ooh. Origin on protoform X??
    Dovie'andi se tovya sagain

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    Yes indeed.

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    Very happy for you that Transwarp: Ravage got picked up by The Lost Seasons group.

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