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Verno
5th June 2013, 02:48 PM
G'Day all,

I've uploaded the Script for Issue #1 of Transformers: Honour up on my DeviantArt Account.

The series (an intended 4 Issues) is a backstory for Dinobot from Beast Wars, and could well have been called Spotlight: Dinobot, but Honour had a nicer ring to it.

Transformers: Honour - Issue #1 (http://rh1n0x.deviantart.com/art/Transformers-Honour-Issue-1-375972418?ga_submit_new=10%253A1370396202)

I'd love to get some feedback on it. And extra points for anyone who would care to guess who Shadow, the mysterious cloaked figure is.

Cheers,
Verno.
Sam
5th June 2013, 09:52 PM
Left a comment via my dA account. :)
i_amtrunks
5th June 2013, 10:10 PM
Give it to Livio for art and it'd have a nice noire feel to it.

All the clues regarding shadow only confused me as to his original character. First thought was Swoop, then Carnivac or even Ravage. Need to read more to get further clues.
Verno
6th June 2013, 11:12 AM
Give it to Livio for art and it'd have a nice noire feel to it.

Haha, if only it was as easy as just 'giving it to him to do' :p Maybe one day in the far flung future some talented Artist will stumble across it and whip it into reality.


All the clues regarding shadow only confused me as to his original character. First thought was Swoop, then Carnivac or even Ravage. Need to read more to get further clues.

Red hot mate, red hot!
Sharky
6th June 2013, 06:59 PM
Hey Verno, had a read on the way home and enjoyed it very much, i look forward to the next installment

i had this vision of shadow being bludgeon....somewhere in his habitat id a decaying half destroyed robot body behind a curtain and he lives his life through his pretender shell...heavily modified..but that is just my heead :p
i_amtrunks
6th June 2013, 07:50 PM
Red hot mate, red hot!

Hrmmm, Maybe one of Catilla's Mayhem squadmates....
Verno
6th June 2013, 11:39 PM
Hey Verno, had a read on the way home and enjoyed it very much, i look forward to the next installment

i had this vision of shadow being bludgeon....somewhere in his habitat id a decaying half destroyed robot body behind a curtain and he lives his life through his pretender shell...heavily modified..but that is just my heead :p

Cheers mate. Glad you cast an eye over it :cool:

You're on the right track with Bludgeon, but it's not him.


Hrmmm, Maybe one of Catilla's Mayhem squadmates....

Maybe it is. From memory, Catilla has a very strong relationship with one of them before his death.
Hursticon
8th June 2013, 09:33 PM
A refined iteration, just as enjoyable the third time round as the first 2 were :D - I'd love to see someone render these words visually, I hope that can happen in time dude. ;):cool:
Verno
8th June 2013, 11:40 PM
A refined iteration, just as enjoyable the third time round as the first 2 were :D - I'd love to see someone render these words visually, I hope that can happen in time dude. ;):cool:

Someday mate, someday :rolleyes:
i_amtrunks
9th June 2013, 12:06 AM
Maybe it is. From memory, Catilla has a very strong relationship with one of them before his death.

Figured out who Shadow is!
lancalot
9th June 2013, 01:19 AM
I don't really know about the beastwars lore ....but reading your story was very engrossing ...i can picture the scenes in my mind... great stuff man .... cant wait for the rest of the story ...
Trent
9th June 2013, 08:30 AM
A refined iteration, just as enjoyable the third time round as the first 2 were :D - I'd love to see someone render these words visually, I hope that can happen in time dude. ;):cool:

Indeed. Illustrations would make this story truely awesome.
Verno
9th June 2013, 09:46 AM
Figured out who Shadow is!

:cool:


I don't really know about the beastwars lore ....but reading your story was very engrossing ...i can picture the scenes in my mind... great stuff man .... cant wait for the rest of the story ...

Because of the era in which the story is set, I'm hoping it helps to flesh out the linkages between the G1 and BW epochs on Cybertron. Technically, there is only 300 years between the end of G1 and the start of the Beast Wars, so it's a hell of a busy time, with a lot of major changes taking place on Cybertron.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Verno
17th June 2013, 12:07 PM
Issue #1 was met with some very kind words from those who read it, and I sincerely thank you for taking the time to do so.

As a 'Thank You' gift, here is the next script:

Transformers: Honour - Issue #2 (http://rh1n0x.deviantart.com/art/Transformers-Honour-Issue-2-378517043)

Enjoy!
- Verno.
Hursticon
17th June 2013, 03:24 PM
Issue #1 was met with some very kind words from those who read it, and I sincerely thank you for taking the time to do so.

As a 'Thank You' gift, here is the next script:

Transformers: Honour - Issue #2 (http://rh1n0x.deviantart.com/art/Transformers-Honour-Issue-2-378517043)

Enjoy!
- Verno.

Shibby (http://youtu.be/J9j8qfndHys?t=2s)! :D
Trent
17th June 2013, 04:56 PM
Super as always. Bring on issue #3!!! :)
Hursticon
17th June 2013, 05:08 PM
Super as always. Bring on issue #3!!! :)

Indeed (http://youtu.be/l1YmS_VDvMY). :D;)
lancalot
17th June 2013, 06:41 PM
Hey whats PNL stands for ???
Verno
17th June 2013, 07:13 PM
Hey whats PNL stands for ???

Panel. It's a cue for the Letterist basically.


Super as always. Bring on issue #3!!!

Haha, it'll be a while away I'm sorry to say lads. But have no fear it'll be along one day.