Honour - Issue #1 (Spotlight: Dinobot)

[Verno]

G'Day all,

I've uploaded the Script for Issue #1 of Transformers: Honour up on my DeviantArt Account.

The series (an intended 4 Issues) is a backstory for Dinobot from Beast Wars, and could well have been called Spotlight: Dinobot, but Honour had a nicer ring to it.

Transformers: Honour - Issue #1

I'd love to get some feedback on it. And extra points for anyone who would care to guess who Shadow, the mysterious cloaked figure is.

Cheers,
Verno.

[Sam]

Left a comment via my dA account.

[i_amtrunks]

Give it to Livio for art and it'd have a nice noire feel to it.

All the clues regarding shadow only confused me as to his original character. First thought was Swoop, then Carnivac or even Ravage. Need to read more to get further clues.

[Verno]

Give it to Livio for art and it'd have a nice noire feel to it.

Haha, if only it was as easy as just 'giving it to him to do' Maybe one day in the far flung future some talented Artist will stumble across it and whip it into reality.

All the clues regarding shadow only confused me as to his original character. First thought was Swoop, then Carnivac or even Ravage. Need to read more to get further clues.

Red hot mate, red hot!

[Sharky]

Hey Verno, had a read on the way home and enjoyed it very much, i look forward to the next installment

i had this vision of shadow being bludgeon....somewhere in his habitat id a decaying half destroyed robot body behind a curtain and he lives his life through his pretender shell...heavily modified..but that is just my heead

[i_amtrunks]

Red hot mate, red hot!

Hrmmm, Maybe one of Catilla's Mayhem squadmates....

[Verno]

Hey Verno, had a read on the way home and enjoyed it very much, i look forward to the next installment

i had this vision of shadow being bludgeon....somewhere in his habitat id a decaying half destroyed robot body behind a curtain and he lives his life through his pretender shell...heavily modified..but that is just my heead

Cheers mate. Glad you cast an eye over it

You're on the right track with Bludgeon, but it's not him.

Hrmmm, Maybe one of Catilla's Mayhem squadmates....

Maybe it is. From memory, Catilla has a very strong relationship with one of them before his death.

[Hursticon]

A refined iteration, just as enjoyable the third time round as the first 2 were - I'd love to see someone render these words visually, I hope that can happen in time dude.

[Verno]

A refined iteration, just as enjoyable the third time round as the first 2 were - I'd love to see someone render these words visually, I hope that can happen in time dude.

Someday mate, someday

[i_amtrunks]

Maybe it is. From memory, Catilla has a very strong relationship with one of them before his death.

Figured out who Shadow is!