Sound & picture quality were good & if anything, I'd shift your camera 6 or 7 inches to the left so that we are looking at a solid black background.
You also managed to keep it under 5 minutes & stayed on point. Just be wary of the umm's & ahhh's & you're well on your way.

Stay away, lad, that's Prime's fight! No, that's not it... Wait...
I knew you had potential.

Well done