Human Component

[Sky Shadow]

The artwork's great but what I'd like to see is more of these guys go onto make mini-comics of several pages, not just the 1 as it's so limiting and it clearly shows now after the initial lot of Mosaics.

Yeah, even Alan Moore - who's verbacious at the best of times - has a rule of 35 words per panel maximum, only 210 words per comic page. This Mosaic breaks those rules before it's even a third of the way through. And it needs an editor for another reason too - the pictures are very pretty, but the page isn't saying anything of note. That's the problem with 99% of the Mosaics - they have no point and no punchline - they just exist for no reason. Except maybe that someone wanted to draw some Transformers and mistakenly assumed that anyone can write. For a one-page comic strip to work and be anything but 'meh', it needs a great last line/a climax/a cliffhanger/a twist/a final punch.

Because that's what the medium's all about.

(For example: http://transformers-mosaic.deviantar...ords-116486736)

[GoktimusPrime]

That's the problem with 99% of the Mosaics - they have no point and no punchline - they just exist for no reason.

And that's why I don't read fanfics! And IMO the Mosaics are a lot better than most fanfics out there. (-_-)

[Sky Shadow]

And that's why I don't read fanfics! And IMO the Mosaics are a lot better than most fanfics out there. (-_-)

So... according to your second sentence, your opinion is that the Mosaics are better than the things you can't actually judge since your first sentence states you don't actually read them.

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Alternatively, I bet I could direct people to many more amazing fanfics than there are amazing Mosaics.

[GoktimusPrime]

Added disclaimer: most mosaics are better than most fanfics that I've read.

http://www.transformersfanfic.com/

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Transformers Babies!

[Pipesqueak]

For a one-page comic strip to work and be anything but 'meh', it needs a great last line/a climax/a cliffhanger/a twist/a final punch.

(For example: http://transformers-mosaic.deviantar...ords-116486736)

Awesome.