Quote Originally Posted by Verno View Post
Sky Shadow is spot on - Beast Wars Megatron is indeed the young Predacon.



I like to work within the confines of Canon as much as I can, thus why I'm always asking stupid questions about G1 and such. The more I tie it directly to those events the better.

I'm trying to avoid paradoxes as much as possible, but when it comes to time travel, sometimes it's impossible. Being influenced by something that you haven't done yet etc etc.

Is there anything that stands out as unlikely or implausable?

The charred remains are of course Scorponok and Terrorsaur. There's a paradox for you.

I'd love some criticism to tear the story apart. It clearly needs work and I wrote it in about an hour, so it's hardly a finished and concise work.
I think I'd have to do a lot of research and watch all of beastwars again to come up with any criticism contsructive or otherwise. it sounds good, time travel is always hard to get your head around, but that makes it just that much more fun.