I concur, a great review too dude as I really want to get this figure!
A couple of things I noticed for constructive criticism:
- Were you doing a Shrapnel impersonation dude?
- At certain points throughout the video the a word you'd say during a sentence would oddly repeat.
- As someone suggested to you previously too (I can't remember who or where it was
), maybe try recording an extra 5secs of silence both pre & post each shot/segment as the cuts are overlapping and/or cutting off your dialogue.