Corvus

[Verno]

With a big Thank You to Paulbot, who helped me flesh out the panels a bit more, we have a new version with some rough, and I do stress rough, images (both Paul's quick sketches and my terrible use of MS Paint. But here we go:



Panel 1 - as before.

Panel 2 - Now has Corvus walking past a huge window showing the Hub debris, and boarding a ship.

Panel 3 - Corvus inside the ship. Out the window we see debris. On display panels in the cockpit to the left and right we see Cybertron on one and Prime on the other.

Panel 4 - Will be an even closer in shot of the maws of Unicron opening (but different so we don't give the game away that it's Unicron yet.

Panel 5 - Some bad-ass looking Cybertronians with a Unicron insigna somewhere on their bodies.

Panel 6 - The big reveal. Unicron beginning to eat the Hub debris and Corvus blasting off to Cybertron to have some fun.

Thoughts?

[Paulbot]

Thanks for sharing my sketches with the world

(I tried to use my graphics tablet but I can't get the hang of it so I gave up and started again with my finger and touchpad )

Hopefully it helps you (and others) get an idea. Rough sketches of the layout help a lot with a comic page.

[Verno]

This is a rough ROUGH idea what the comic would look like.

Except when it's done properly, it'd be awesome!



Ignore Hound, I couldn't find an appropriate picture of a gangway.

Imagine how cool it could be if someone drew it!

*sigh* One day...

[Hursticon]

Well, all I can say is hat these story boards look absolutely excellent!
I think these Mosaics, dude, is an excellent way of garnering some interest/attention from artists who've worked on other mosaics and might wish to expand; very glad to hear you've managed to get 1 bloke onboard already too!

[Verno]

Cheers Hursty, I can always count on you for a morale boost!

She's gonna be a slow process of gaining attention and a (hopefully) good reputation.

Let's hope you get to see a finished product one day.

[1orion2many]

I was wondering how this was going, I used to be quite good at drawing but like everything if you don't stay in Practice you become crap at it. If you still need people to help I might have a play around this weekend and see how crap I have become

[Verno]

Cheers Orion, but I've actually got an artist and colourist signed up to do this one as of this morning! Woo!

But if you're at all interested in some other work, I've still got the first issue of Csirac that I'm looking to get drawn.

Csirac Issue #1

Sam, from here, is having a look at pages 1-4 with the BW bots, chanandeller (Ravage) from DA is taking care of the Predacon attack on pages 5-7, as well as 18. The rest is open to interest. You might like to have a look at pages 8-12, the big countdown scene?

[M-bot]

I just read about Mosaic going the way of the dodo... how does this affect your plans? Was looking forward to seeing Corvus on there...

[Verno]

Yeah, I was shattered to hear about Mosaic. Hopefully a similar project pops its head up, as it definitely fills a hole within the fandom - that of collaborative projects.

But even if another such means of publication doesn't arise, Corvus will still get made