This is great! well shot and framed like UltraMarginal said. You have a great launching platform to go from so it will be easy soon.
As for a tip for writing: Keep a pen and pad (or mobile phone) near by and just write every idea you have for a story down. When you have a few you will be able to sift through and shoot based around what you have already written down and you will be able to link ideas together soon enough.