TF Comic Collaboration

[Deonasis]

This is a cool project Verno I would look up some TF:Mosaic artists to ask if you haven't tried them already.

[Verno]

This is a cool project Verno I would look up some TF:Mosaic artists to ask if you haven't tried them already.

They were my first port of call, but none have come forward as interested, or are too busy with prior commitments to take on any other work atm.

I also tried the 'Lost Seasons' and 'Seeds of Deception' guys, but no go.

I can only imagine that they all had similar teething problems in getting their projects off the ground to begin with.

But I'll persevere.

[Sam]

I had a quick browse of your script, I can do pages 5 to 9, inclusive.

Because I have not drawn any Beast Wars / TM characters before, it may take me a while to work out a style I'm comfortable with.

I'll send you a couple of test shots when I have time. Depending on whether you find an inker and colourist, I could look at trying shading with pencils for some depth.

Because I don't have any Beast Wars toys, I only have online galleries such as these: http://www.seibertron.com/transforme...us-primal/455/

for reference. If you know of sites with higher resolution images, please send me some links.

[Verno]

Sweet as Man! Welcome aboard!

Chanandeller has already put dibs on pages 7, 8 and 9, so don't worry about those. But feel free to have a crack at some more of the earlier pages in the BW flashback (flashforward?)

[Sam]

So are pages 1 to 4 taken? If not, I might try those instead.

[Verno]

So are pages 1 to 4 taken? If not, I might try those instead.

They're all yours.

You're a brave man - taking on the only Beast Wars section of a die-hard BW fan's comic I'm sure it'll come out great though!

[Verno]

Here's the Script we'll be working with.

TransWarp: Csirac Issue #1 Final Script

Reading over the script again (in the context that I'm hoping that it is liked by the fandom and other artists will want to come on board to help create the remaining Issues) I decided it was a bit boring, so I've compressed a couple of scenes and added an extra one at the end.

The opening scene with Primal, Rattrap and Rhinox was originally 6 pages, but I'm confident the details will be easily covered in 4.

The countdown was to be 7 pages, which an awful lot of a comic, so I've shortened it to five, which is still a lot but there is method to my madness.

You see, I want the (spoilers alert) TransWarp explosion after a page turn, ie, on an even numbered page, sort of like a mini-reveal. If it's on an odd numbered page, it's already been revealed. Does that make sense?

And I've added what was the first scene of Issue #2 to the end of Issue #1, to add a bit more suspense, and get some dialogue from Silverbolt and Razorclaw, some old G1 favourites which might raise some interest with fans.

Everyone is free to have a read! I'd love some feedback, especially from comic book fans, as I'm somewhat in over my head here as I'm not well versed in Comic book formatting and such.