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  1. 21st November 2013, 04:40 PM #1
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    Default Transformers: House Adventures

    I know that there are a couple of errors in this first part, but this is my first comic and I'm feeling pretty shy about it.



    First episode is a bit of a Take That Me because of how much I dislike WFC over Mass Effect. Mass Effect is way more entertaining than WFC. This isn't meant to hurt those who love WFC, just me.

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    Yes, I know. There are errors, but in the next episode, things will get better as I go along. These episodes happen randomly off the top of my head. So... Haha!
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  2. 21st November 2013, 04:58 PM #2
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    Very Nicely done, especially as a first crack at photocomics.

    My main suggestion would be location of speech bubbles to ensure left to right/down the page reading maintains the sequence of speech.

    I am very much looking forward to future installments.
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  3. 21st November 2013, 05:41 PM #3
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    hey that was pretty good... the expression on the figure is spot on... Keep it up...looking forward to more
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    Pretty good for a first run, it's got plenty of potential too so I look forward to seeing more Spirit!
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